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Sun Sep 7, 2008, 3:48 AM
i thought of this in the car and this is my current project. sum1 told me i could work on the "i" "i" "i" thing going on in my poetry, so this is my first test... :) give comments?

GHOST

talk for hours but no one hears.
scream and yell. no one blinks.
help her. she's dieing.
save her. going under...

she's reaching out for you as you pass,
just out of her grasp.

chorus:
i'm the ghost on the road.
i feel you as you walk through me.
i know you and i love you.
i could hear you all along.

that quiet girl, the one who stares,
reaches out when no ones there.
she says it all without words.
"i wish you could hear me."

TELL ME WAT U THINK! :)

  • Mood: Pain
  • Listening to: piano medley
  • Watching: wat i say...
  • Playing: like sum1 reads this...:)

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  • Current Residence: I don't live anywhere, I've gone insane.
  • Interests: reading, drawing, sleeping, and eating
  • Favourite movie: I would like anything scary.
  • Favourite genre of music: rock.
  • Favourite artist: qua?
  • Favourite poet or writer: W.B. Yeats (The Two Trees)
  • Shell of choice: turtle!
  • Wallpaper of choice: None- Free the walls!
  • Skin of choice: Blue.
  • Favourite game: DDR!
  • Favourite gaming platform: DreamCast
  • Favourite cartoon character: It's too hard to choose! I'm a bishounen fan.
  • Personal Quote: I search for Love, and Truth, and Life.
  • Tools of the Trade: The norm.

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thx for fav :D

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thankss for all the favs :-)

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curse the corpses, call the futurists: this is the ballad of the young offenders.
Sorry I've spaced out, in the space that it's been since we've talked, what advice are you refering to?

Thanks for the favs on Saccharine Silence and You. I really appreciate it!

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I'm a bitch, I'm a lover,I'm a child, I'm a mother,I'm a sinner, I'm a saint,I do not feel ashamed,I'm your hell, I'm your dream i'm nothing in between, you know you wouldn't want it any other way-meredith brooks
hey girl how've you been....
Holy crap, thanks for all the favs! ^^; :horns:

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hey i miss u i want 2 give u a big hug well this well have to work. oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooo.......
thanx for the favs! all 25 of them =)

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i miss you so much wahaa
boo hoo boohoo hoo hoo
:cries: :crying:
Thanks for the watch <3

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